“The news about Walter Berglund wasn’t picked up locally – he and Patty had moved away to Washington two years earlier and meant nothing to St Paul now – but the urban gentry of Ramsey Hill were not so loyal to their city as not to read the New York Times. According to a long and very unflattering story in the Times, Walter had made quite a mess of his professional life out there in the nation’s capital. His old neighbours had some difficulty reconciling the quotes about him in the Times [“arrogant,” “high-handed,” “ethically compromised”] with the generous, smiling, red-faced 3M employee they remembered pedalling his commuter bicycle up Summit Avenue in February snow; it seemed strange that Walter, who was greener than Greenpeace and whose own roots were rural, should be in trouble now for conniving with the coal industry and mistreating country people. Then again, there had always been something not quite right about the Berglunds.”
‘Freedom’ by Jonathan Franzen
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Great opening paragraph 20… ‘Notes on a Scandal’ #amwriting #FirstPara
“1 March 1998. The other night at dinner, Sheba talked about the first time that she and the Connolly boy kissed. I had heard most of it before, of course, there being few aspects of the Connolly business that Sheba has not described to me several times over. But this time round, something new came up. I happened to ask her if anything about the first embrace had surprised her. She laughed. Yes, the smell of the whole thing had been surprising, she said. She hadn’t anticipated his personal odour and if she had, she would probably have guessed at something teenagey: bubble gum, cola, feet.”
‘Notes on a Scandal’ by Zoe Heller
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‘Half of a Yellow Sun’ by Chimamanda Ngozi Adiche
‘I’ll Take You There’ by Joyce Carol Oates
‘Death in Summer’ by William Trevor
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Great opening paragraph… 20
“1 March 1998. The other night at dinner, Sheba talked about the first time that she and the Connolly boy kissed. I had heard most of it before, of course, there being few aspects of the Connolly business that Sheba has not described to me several times over. But this time round, something new came up. I happened to ask her if anything about the first embrace had surprised her. She laughed. Yes, the smell of the whole thing had been surprising, she said. She hadn’t anticipated his personal odour and if she had, she would probably have guessed at something teenagey: bubble gum, cola, feet.”
‘Notes on a Scandal’ by Zoe Heller
Great opening paragraph 19… ‘Catch-22’ #amwriting #FirstPara
“It was love at first sight.
The first time Yossarian saw the chaplain he fell madly in love with him.”
‘Catch-22’ by Joseph Heller
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‘Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World’ by Haruki Murakami
‘The Philosopher’s Pupil’ by Iris Murdoch
‘The Bell Jar’ by Sylvia Plath
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Great opening paragraph 18… ‘The Ghost Road’ #amwriting #FirstPara
“In deck-chairs all along the front the bald pink knees of Bradford businessmen nuzzled the sun.”
‘The Ghost Road’ by Pat Barker, #1 Regeneration Trilogy
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‘Rebecca’ by Daphne du Maurier
‘The Murder Room’ by PD James
‘That They May Face the Rising Sun’ by John McGahern
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Great opening paragraph 17… ‘The Hobbit’ #amwriting #FirstPara
“In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit hole, and that means comfort.”
‘The Hobbit’ by JRR Tolkien
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‘A Bouquet of Barbed Wire’ by Andrea Newman
‘The Guest Cat’ by Takashi Hiraide
‘Before I Go to Sleep’ by SJ Watson
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Great opening paragraph 16… ‘The Other Boleyn Girl’ #amwriting #FirstPara
“Spring 1521. I could hear a roll of muffled drums. But I could see nothing but the lacing on the bodice of the lady standing in front of me, blocking my view of the scaffold. I had been at this court for more than a year and attended hundreds of festivities; but never before one like this.”
‘The Other Boleyn Girl’ by Philippa Gregory
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‘The Cement Garden’ by Ian McEwan
‘Midnight’s Children’ by Salman Rushdie
‘Herzog’ by Saul Bellow
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