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Great Opening Paragraph 105… ‘The Long Drop’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Denise Mina“Monday 2 December. He knows too much to be an honest man but says he wants to help. He says he can get the gun for them. William Watt is keen to meet him. Laurence Dowdall has already met Peter Manuel several times. He never wants to see him again.”
‘The Long Drop’ by Denise Mina
Amazon

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Divisadero’ by Michael Ondaatje
‘American Psycho’ by Brett Easton Ellis
‘Dance Dance Dance’ by Haruki Murakami

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Great Opening Paragraph 89… ‘The Children Act’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Ian McEwan“London. Trinity term one week old. Implacable June weather. Fiona Maye, a High Court judge, at home on Sunday evening, supine on a chaise longue, staring past her stockinged feet towards the end of the room, towards a partial view of recessed bookshelves by the fireplace and, to one side, by a tall window, a tiny Renoir lithograph of a bather, bought by her thirty years ago for fifty pounds. Probably a fake. Below it, centred on a round walnut table, a blue vase. No memory of how she came by it. Nor when she last put flowers in it. The fireplace not lit in a year. Blackened raindrops falling irregularly into the grate with a ticking sound against balled-up yellowing newsprint. A Bokhara rug spread on wide polished floorboards. Looming at the edge of vision, a baby grand piano bearing silver-framed family photos on its deep black whine. On the floor by the chaise lounge, within her reach, the draft of a judgment. And Fiona was on her back, wishing all this stuff at the bottom of the sea.”
‘The Children Act’ by Ian McEwan 
Amazon

Read my reviews of The Children Act and Nutshell.

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
The Sea, The Sea’ by Iris Murdoch 
The Hunger Games’ by Suzanne Collins 
‘The God of Small Things’ by Arundhati Roy 

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