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Great Opening Paragraph 124… ‘The Camomile Lawn’ #amwriting #FirstPara

“Helena Cuthbertson picked up the crumpled Times by her sleeping husband and went to the flower room to iron it.”
‘The Camomile Lawn’ by Mary WesleyMary Wesley
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
For Whom the Bell Tolls’ by Ernest Hemingway 
A Month in the Country’ by JL Carr
Back When We Were Grown-Ups’ by Anne Tyler 

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Great Opening Paragraph 118… ‘The Whereabouts of Eneas McNulty’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Sebastian Barry“In the middle of the lonesome town, at the back of John Street, in the third house from the end, there is a little room. For this small bracket in the long paragraph of the street’s history, it belongs to Eneas McNulty. All about him the century has just begun, a century some of which he will endure, but none of which will belong to him. There are all the broken continents of the earth, there is the town park named after Father Moran, with its forlorn roses – all equal to Eneas at five, and nothing his own, but that temporary little room. The dark linoleum curls at the edge where it meets the dark wall. There is a pewter jug on the bedside table that likes to hoard the sun and moon on its curve. There is a tall skinny wardrobe with an ancient hatbox on top, dusty, with or without a hat, he does not know. A room perfectly attuned to him, perfectly tempered, with the long spinning of time perfect and patterned in the bright windowframe, the sleeping of sunlight on the dirty leaves of the maple, the wars of the sparrows and the blue tits for the net of suet his mother ties in the tree, the angry rain that puts its narrow fingers in through the putty, the powerful sudden seaside snow that never sits, the lurch of the dark and the utter merriment of mornings.”
The Whereabouts of Eneas McNulty’ by Sebastian Barry
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
The Slaves of Solitude’ by Patrick Hamilton
Such a Long Journey’ by Rohinton Mistry
Sea Glass’ by Anita Shreve

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Great Opening Paragraph 116… ‘The Slaves of Solitude’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Patrick Hamilton“London, the crouching monster, like every other monster has to breathe, and breathe it does in its own obscure, malignant way. Its vital oxygen is composed of suburban working men and women of all kinds, who every morning are sucked up through an infinitely complicated respiratory apparatus of trains and termini into the mighty congested lungs, held there for a number of hours, and then, in the evening, exhaled violently through the same channels.”
‘The Slaves of Solitude’ by Patrick Hamilton
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Read my review of The Slaves of Solitude.

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Reading Turgenev/Two Lives’ by William Trevor
‘The Children Act’ by Ian McEwan
‘The Ghost Road’ by Pat Barker

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Great Opening Paragraph 115… ‘The Garden of Evening Mists’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Tan Twan Eng“On a mountain above the clouds once lived a man who had been the gardener of the Emperor of Japan. Not many people would have known of him before the war, but I did. He had left his home on the rim of the sunrise to come to the central highlands of Malaya. I was seventeen years old when my sister first told me about him. A decade would pass before I travelled up to the mountains to see him.”
‘The Garden of Evening Mists’ by Tan Twan Eng
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Read my review of The Garden of Evening Mists.

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Armadillo’ by William Boyd
‘To Have and Have Not’ by Ernest Hemingway
‘Super-Cannes’ by JG Ballard

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Great Opening Paragraph 114… ‘Agnes Grey’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Anne Bronte“All true histories contain instruction; though, in some, the treasure may be hard to find, and when found, so trivial in quantity, that the dry shrivelled kernel scarcely compensates for the trouble of cracking the nut. Whether this be the case with my history or not, I am hardly competent to judge. I sometimes think it might prove useful to some, and entertaining to others; but the world may judge for itself. Shielded by my own obscurity, and by the lapse of years, and a few fictitious names, I do not fear to venture; and will candidly lay before the public what I would not disclose to the most intimate friend.”
‘Agnes Grey’ by Anne Bronte 
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Affinity’ by Sarah Waters
‘In Cold Blood’ by Truman Capote
‘Family Album’ by Penelope Lively

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Great Opening Paragraph 112… ‘Affinity’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Sarah Waters“3 August 1873. I was never so frightened as I am now. They have left me sitting in the dark, with only the light from the window to write by. They have put me in my own room, they have locked the door on me. They wanted Ruth to do it, but she would not. She said ‘What, do you want me to lock up my own mistress, who has done nothing?’ In the end the doctor took the key from her & locked the door himself, then made her leave me. Now the house is full of voices, all saying my name. If I close my eyes & listen it might be any ordinary night. I might be waiting for Mrs Brink to come & take me down to a dark circle, & Madeleine or any girl might be there, blushing, thinking of Peter, of Peter’s great dark whiskers & shining hands.’
‘Affinity’ by Sarah Waters [UK: Virago]
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Click here to read my review of The Paying Guests by Sarah Waters.

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Illywhacker’ by Peter Carey
‘Sophie’s World’ by Jostein Gaarder
‘Goldfinger’ by Ian Fleming

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Great Opening Paragraph 111… ‘Reading Turgenev’ #amwriting #FirstPara

William Trevor“A woman, not yet fifty-seven, slight and seeming frail, eats carefully at a table in a corner. Her slices of buttered bread have been halved for her, her fried egg mashed, her bacon cut. ‘Well, this is happiness!’ she murmurs aloud, but none of the other women in the dining room replies because none of them is near enough to hear. She’s privileged, the others say, being permitted to occupy on her own the bare-topped table in the corner. She has her own salt and pepper.”
‘Reading Turgenev’ from ‘Two Lives’ by William Trevor
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘The Children Act’ by Ian McEwan
‘Pride and Prejudice’ by Jane Austen
‘Dance Dance Dance’ by Haruki Murakami

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Great Opening Paragraph 110… ‘Jane Eyre’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Charlotte Bronte“There was no possibility of taking a walk that day. We had been wandering, indeed, in the leafless shrubbery an hour in the morning; but since dinner (Mrs Reed, when there was no company, dined early) the cold winter wind had brought with it clouds so sombre, and a rain so penetrating, that further outdoor exercise was now out of the question.”
‘Jane Eyre’ by Charlotte Bronte
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘The Last Juror’ by John Grisham
‘A Change of Climate’ by Hilary Mantel
‘Astonishing Splashes of Colour’ by Clare Morrall

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Great Opening Paragraph 109… ‘Sea Glass’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Anita Shreve“Honora sets the cardboard suitcase on the slab of granite. The door is mackereled, paint-chipped – green or black, it is hard to tell. Above the knocker. There are panes of glass, some broken and others opaque with age. Overhead is a portico of weathered shingles and beyond that a milk-and-water sky. Honora pinches the lapels of her suit together and holds her hat against the wind. She peers at the letter B carved into the knocker and thinks, This is the place where it all begins.”
‘Sea Glass’ by Anita Shreve
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘The Long Drop’ by Denise Mina
‘Lucky You’ by Carl Hiasson
‘American Psycho’ by Brett Easton Ellis

Read my review of The Stars are Fire by Anita Shreve.

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Great Opening Paragraph 106… ‘A Month in the Country’ #amwriting #FirstPara

JL Carr“When the train stopped I stumbled out, nudging and kicking the kitbag before me. Back down the platform someone was calling despairingly, ‘Oxgodby… Oxgodby.’ No-one offered a hand, so I climbed back into the compartment, stumbling over ankles and feet to get at the fish-bass (on the rack) and my folding camp-bed (under the seat). If this was a fair sample of northerners, then this was enemy country so I wasn’t too careful where I put my boots. I heard one chap draw in his breath and another grunt: neither spoke.’
‘A Month in the Country’ by JL Carr
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Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Before I Go To Sleep’ by SJ Watson
‘Spies’ by Michael Frayn
‘Midnight’s Children’ by Salman Rushdie

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