Great Opening paragraph 49… ‘A Bouquet of Barbed Wire’ #amwriting #FirstPara

Andrea Newman“It began to rain as he entered the park, but not hard enough to make him look round for a taxi. Emerging from the station, he had been tempted by a pale gleam of sunshine, sufficient to convince him of the physical benefits of walking. He needed exercise, he had decided, just as he needed fewer cigarettes and less alcohol: it was pathetic how the habits of sloth and self-indulgence crept up unnoticed, along with middle age, that unbecoming state which you did not even recognize until events brought it sharply and unkindly home to you. And now the fine spring rain, for her first day back. He pictured her with painful tenderness, suntanned and shivering, getting ready for college in the unfamiliar flat. Was he too late? Would she still be there by the time he was able to phone? He had left home an hour ahead, under Cassie’s indulgent eyes, to catch an earlier train, feeling he could only telephone properly from the office, yet not knowing what he could possibly find to say that would be sufficiently casual when he finally heard her voice.”
‘A Bouquet of Barbed Wire’ by Andrea Newman

Try one of these 1st paras & discover a new author:-
‘Jamrach’s Menagerie’ by Carol Birch
‘Notes on a Scandal’ by Zoe Heller
‘Bel Canto’ by Ann Patchett

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A 1st para which makes me want to read more: A BOUQUET OF BARBED WIRE by Andrea Newman #books via @SandraDanby

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